Danavers's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mavis]

Good.

But his left arm seems out of place, like it was slapped on the picture.

Everything else was good though.

Tommy-Gun responds:

Thanks. Yeah, that left arm was where I first started, so I should have seen that coming.

[Tankmen]

Nice.

Badass.

[Big Bad Bot]

My name is Optimus Prime.

Sweet.

[Annika]

Wow.

I can't find one thing wrong with this thing.

[R-99]

Cool but...

That clip looks pretty small for a gun like that. I would recommend making one of those big ones that attaches to the side of the gun, like the M60. Quality-wise though, it's a great drawing.

10/10

Tommy-Gun responds:

Thanks, I'll look forward to drawing bigger clips next time. Usually, I don't pay that much attention to the clip or mag though.

[Hank]

Wow...

Outstanding job. I really wish you hadn't put those letters in though, it just doesn't seem to go with the flow. Maybe if you did the letters in black though...

Anyway, great job.

10/10

Tommy-Gun responds:

I agree, the picture would have been better if the letters were black (or weren't there at all.) Thanks for the positive criticism.

[M16A1 With Grenade Launcher]

Your best one

I think this is your best drawing of an assault rifle so far.

marine111 responds:

I have drawn a Enfield, wich looks better i think. Thanks.